I need some help. Right now, I'm drawing a blank on how to describe the packs. Like how they rule, the atmosphere behind it, etc.
Like Inferno's is obviously the easiest. It's a harsh place and run with an iron fist. It's Sera and Ronoh I have difficulty. Besides that I find Sera to be more family-oriented and loving than Ronoh. Haha But I need the info for the information in each pack section.
Ronoh is more dysfunctional and there is often in-fighting and stuff like that. Sera is more loyal to each other and they are all a very close knit family. I don't know how to put that in a different wording. But it seems like Ronoh always has a lot more drama with the pack members than Sera does.
I wouldn't go into crazy detail, because if you think about it, all the Alpha's of Sera and Ronoh will be retiring soon due to age, and thje pack could change entirely. I would just describe as so.
Ronoh:
A pack that follows specific authorities of Alpha, Beta, and Head Ranks. Each member is expected to follow their rank and expected to be loyal to the pack. This pack requires a lot of commitment, and will require an ability to deal with higher amounts of drama. Conflicts can be common, but just like anywhere else, we can't all get along.
The pack is constructed into a basic, where rules follow an ordinary ranking and placement. When entering this pack you will often be faced with a way to prove yourself, as Ronoh wants to ensure their members are not weak, and can support each other. Not only do you need skill, but manners are key to this pack along with obeying the Alpha's command. This pack is a safe, yet strict place to live, and can be worth your wild if you follow your Alpha's command.
Sera:
A more laid back pack, but still just as serious when it comes to danger. This pack is an easier pack to be accepted into, normally having more caring Alpha's and Beta's that are out to make the day right for you rather than themselves. Sera has ordinary rankings and they are often willing to go by what you want, changing your rank to make you happy or allowing you mini vacations to ensure your life goes your way.
This pack is very family based, and they all believe family should come first. Protection is key to this pack, and the Alphas are always cautious to be sure that all members know a bit of skill in personal protection. When entering the Sera lands you will be approched in a less intimidating way, but your actions are still judged and you can easily be declined just as easily as accepted. This land can be a wonderful place to live as long as you don't go against the Alpha's words, and if you play your cards right, you might just get anything you want.
Well, I figured after a few months, I'd go back to edit. Including more basic history, such as when the war occurs. And then, list new alpha reigns and what not. And when a pack's dynamics start changing, that's when I'd edit.
I do like your descriptions of the packs, those are actually pretty good.
Hm, I'm thinking of adding a list of simplified current ranks. Just by rank and name for quick looking, but idk yet. Rather than have the info on them such as Element, helper, blah blah blah
Well, we'd still have the character page thing. So, no need to fret. Just an added 'Simplified' one in the Guides. So, 2 locations. One detailed, one just for quick access.